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Titahi Bay Poem

Poem: Summer Vibes: As I feel the sand tickle my feet when I take my first steps onto the beach, The scorching sun burns underneath my feet causing them to go bright red, The vibrant colours of the beach sends summery vibes down my spine, ‘Splash’ I can hear the waves crashing into each other as they become parallel, Indicating that it is time for summer, I hear joy and laughter, Coming from the beach, Overlooking the distance, I see the bitter waves splash onto the rough rocks, I run towards the clear distance and into the freezing water. My feet start feeling paralyzed, I run out of the water and into the warmth of the sun, I watch as the sun meets its end, The warmth turns to coldness, It was time to go home.

Ugene Poem Learning Story

Purpose:To describe the cloud in personification Emotional Cloud: My happiness is sadness, My goal is destructive, My emotions change in a second, I am frightening to people, But to others I’m normal, My  inside is joy, My  outside is anger, My tears fall to the ground as light hits, The way I strike when I am angry, Gives people a scared feeling, Leaving them blankless, No word spoken, No noise to be heard, Silence is what I have earned, But when I am happy and feeling funny, My anger goes away and out comes the inside me. I was good at using powerful words e.g destructive I can use personification for e.g My  inside is joy, My  outside is anger. I got better at using personification becaused I used it alot in my writing. It was hard to make the cloud into personification because I don't usually use it. I feel frustrated when I'm writing my poem because it's hard coming up with ideas. My next steps are to use personi...