Ugene's published writing temr 2
War Between Love (Max) I’m going to the war. (Sheena) Why Max ? (CJ) Bro I heard your going war G. (Max) Yeh chur. I'm gonna go fight the Germans. (CJ) Ooo. Skuxx G I wunna come. (Sheena) Ehhh.How is dis stuff skuxx? Ur so dead Max. (Maxiline) Hahaha.Max is just dreaming.He can't even fight mum when he has to go have a shower lol. (Max) Shut up!! I can fight Germans, Ur just jealous u can’t even go to war. (maxiline) War is gay.I rather stay home and play Fortnite. (Sheena) I agree with Maxiline. (Max) Well Sheena if you are going to be like that I think that we should break up . (Sheena) OK that sounds good. My learning story I was good at including a surprise, a problem or a twist because I put in that the Max was go to the war and his girlfriend was not happy about it because she may lose the love of her life. I got better at using words to describe and make a picture in our head eg dead. I chose to use this word because ...