The Three Little Ligers
The Three Little Ligers:
Purpose: To interest and entertain our reader.
- S.C:
- use compound sentences with 2 or more ideas joined by conjunctions to add in more interesting details
- Powerful adjectives to make our reader visualize
- Adding in weird and funny ideas.
Once a time upon there had lived three ligers named. Magnificent Milly, Lovely Lilly and Big Billy. Their disgusting and annoying mother was so disadvantaged that they had to move out.
Because they had to relocate to another place, each of them found them a place to stay.
The first liger Milly stayed at a hotel. But one peaceful and quiet night. Milly heard a quiet knock at the door. Because there was a quiet knock at the door, Milly unlocked the door just to see there was no one is there. But suddenly there was a small cruel flea who had entered the hotel room and jumped into Milly’s fur. ”It’s me you stupid dummy” said the flea as he hopped into Milly’s fur. “Oh no” said Milly.
Because Milly was in trouble and got ahold of his phone, he called his siblings and asked them to urgently come to the hotel he was staying at. As soon his siblings had heard he was in trouble, they sprinted as fast like the flash into the hotel room!. “What is going on Milly? says the siblings sarcastically. “There is a naughty flea in my fur and where the heck do you live!? Because Milly was itchy and needed help, her siblings reply “It's a long story”. “ Well let's just say we met a huge panda named Pou” says Billy. While Milly’s scratching, Lilly felt a scratch too.
“Oh no not me!!!” Lilly said in a worried voice. But Billy was the lucky and fortune one. “Yay, Not me at all hahaha heeheehee” Because But Billy's luck didn’t last long as he felt a scratch too. “ Oh no”Billy said sadly.”Oh no not me!”!!. Screamed Lily in a worried voice. If only we had someone that could help us and who loves eating fleas. “Hey I know who to call for him, the Dragon Warrior”. Said Milly. There was a big surprise when they heard a knock at the door. As they went to go open it, they saw a Dragon Warrior standing at the hotel door. “Did someone say dragon warrior” says a fat white panda. The flea was shocked to see a dragon warrior in Milly’s hotel room.“I am Pou Kung Fu Fighter and I am here for the flea”
Pou had found the flea lurking in Millys fur and trying to hide from Pou. “You think you can hide from me.” Said Pou. The dragon warrior picked up the flea with his hands and gobbled it down in less than 1 second.“ Yummy” says Pou while stuffing his mouth. “Thanks Pou” said the ligers “Anything for you guys.” “Now let's go have a non flea slumber party at Billy's house” Said Milly “How about, get a job at the zoo or at Pak’n’Save and buy lazy mama a house for all of us live in” said Billy “Sure of course” said Lilly in a rushing voice as she was running away.
Soon they were all happy living in a huge, romantic beautiful house while Pou was happily stuffing his mouth with fleas!
Stay tuned to find out where Lilly and Billy lived…..
We were learning to use complex,compound and simple sentences to hook in our reader.
We were good at working together as a group to complete our writing
We were also good at hooking in our reader and painting a picture in their head.
We got better at use complex,compound and simple sentences.
We also got good at adding in funny and weird ideas to entertain our reader.
It was hard to try and add in complex, compound and simple sentences for better effect.
My next steps is to come up with an interesting title so my reader will want to read the story
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